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Ending



The brush of her hide

Can stir deep inside

Emotions I thought I couldn't feel

The wishing sky wind

Brings my doubts to an end

Together, we find, we're both real

Every movement full of grace

Everything she says is whimsical

For when hippos are in love

Even rabbit farts are musical


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©19 December 2001 - 11:06pm — cameca8
5 November 2004 - 4:48am — Alyssa Fox (not verified)
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I like you.

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Richard Elliott (not verified)
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Bloody Brilliant Series! Richard.E.

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Miranda Rae (not verified)
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Donald, Yipppeee! I love the happy ending. ;) Did you ever consider posting all of the parts together as one piece?

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Renee' (not verified)
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I just have to say that this is the funniest thing that I have ever read ..... I really like the end.... about the Rabbit farts.... I loved that..... LOL.... this made my day.... thank you for sharing this with us... Renee' you may feel free to read any of my work if you choose to.... http:/www.postpoems.com/members/hawksquaw99