Eye Contact

Standing in my own quiet place

I see a thousand people walk by

I could reach out and touch them

But they wouldn't feel it

For that matter, niether would I



They walk away and leave no trace

Except a lady I thought I saw smile

Out of reach and out of touch

I smile and know they'll never see it

Except one every once in a while

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Violet Carolina's picture

A people watcher? Me too. And, yes, some do look back. I can think of times I've been one who didn't make eye contact, the lesser healthy of individuals. Eye contact is a statement of readiness, I think. Nice work.

Eric Cockrell's picture

liked this... we live in an invisable world... or i should say one in which we're often invisable... good poem eric

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

I like it, I like it alot! (say that last one with an English accent :) It flows better!

hawksquaw99's picture

this was just wonderful.... and it is so true.... keep them coming Renee'