Today was a waste of time
They say every moment is precious
Maybe tomorrow, but not today
Nothing was accomplished
No good feelings were achieved
All because someone broke his committment
He was supposed to be here
But never showed
Not even a telephone call
Too busy, I guess things came up
Had to be reminded
By then it was too late
He'd already ruined another's day
And it was a waste of time
Pardon me for my lack of a large vobabulary, but this is a really good poem. Actually, I can't say that I've read a poem of yours that wasn't good. You seem to be a very accomplished poet. I hate to ask for favors, but if you get a chance I would be thankful if you would go over some of my poetry and give me some advice.
Well I am pretty sure this has happened to every female on the face of the earth, I know I can definately relate. Good work, you can tel your not a beginner at this. Keep writing
Nicole
Nicole.J.Burgesss