A Willow wept where I lay you now
Protected beneath the branches, it's more than I could give
Broken hearted physically, emotionally
Both left unable to breathe
Tiny hand in mine, but not in a way I had imagined
Gone before I knew your face, still you were mine
I didn't want to let you go, it shouldn't be this way
If all were right, if still a fight
I would change everything
my take
I've been there too
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/9inety/poem/324941
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
But,..
You said it so much more eloquently.
You write beautifully. :.)
thank you for sharing with me.