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Breaking Down
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July - December 2005 You built me up, put me on this stand,
You knocked me back down,
This is where I land,
In this sea of green,
And fields of blue,
Upside down is upright for you.
And you smile as I cry,
And you live as I die.
Don't you see I'm just breaking down?
You gave me all the wings I needed,
To fly to this throne where I am seated,
But now when I look to my right,
The King has run into the night,
Alone.
A fake.
With a plastic crown of thorn.
And you smile as I cry,
And you live as I die.
Don't you see I'm just breaking down?
perfect... yeah its a good poem with rich idea and sweet composition of words... the way you did it is nice and heart feeling of course... so I can say that you are a good poet with sweet poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?