i'm crunchy on the inside
all dried up and hard
yet i pour myself out for all
giving up all that i have
and i dont know how to stop
i'm crunchy on the inside
easily broken, crushed into pieces
i am continuously collecting
the little fragments of my poor soul
it rattles in the subtle breeze
i'm crunchy on the inside
still dying of thirst
im thirsty for a friend
who will lubricate the piercing sorrows
an ointment for this dark unbearable hurt
i'm crunchy on the inside
incomprehensibly parched
but when he holds me close,
an inebriating rush quenches the soul
his love pours into the cracks
of my broken spirit
"...incomprehensibly parched..."
I like this total & uncompromisingly dry image - nice imagery in here - Just Bein' Allets
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Just reread - I get so much more with a second reading - nice write ~star~
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