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Hell
Sitting in this prison
My mind is my cell
I stare at my reflection
It's darker than hell
I eat away at the memories
Keep saying the past isn't real
My life flashes before me
I'd give anything not to feel
So it's time to play soldier
Try and grow against the pain
So I throw you in the ashes
In my past you're just a stain
The things now buried in me
Yet I can never let them go
So I just spilled my fucking guts for you
Just so you would know
I HATE THE WAY YOU TREAT ME
I HATE THE WAY YOU LIE
I HATE THE WAY YOU DECIEVE ME
I JUST WISH THAT YOU WOULD DIE
I CAN'T CONTROL MY ANGER
I CAN'T CONTROL MY HATE
IT SEEMS MY HAND HAS FOLDED
AND YOU HAVE SEALED MY FATE
Wow, I would've just loved to tell one of friends the end of that poem a little while ago...she doesn't really get me.But, I'll live.this is a very good poem. Very well writen, I enjoy very much reading your stuff.
very deep poem, you should be proud of it. my compliments to a great writer:) ~ Colette ~
The ending is great and flows better than the rest of the poem. Its really good. I can deffinately feel a lot of emotions in it.
damm this kicks major ass! i love this shit!