Hell yeah!
Had a hot date
Took her out to the movies
Bring down the lights
Now you know I'll enjoy it
Yeah!
Put my arms around her and get a reaction
She brings me in close and then gives me a little kiss, alright!
Poisoned lips
Man it just took your kiss
And then I couldn't breathe
I'm dyin', kill me
Poisoned lips
Just a moment of bliss
And then I fell to my knees
Went to take her out
And meet her at her classroom
Somethin' went wrong
Said she wanted to break up
Damn!
Went and broke my heart and then left me there standin'
I'm gonna move on but now I can't forget that kiss, alright!
Poisoned lips
Man it just took your kiss
And then I couldn't breathe
I'm dyin', kill me
Poisoned lips
Just a moment of bliss
And then I fell to my knees
I'm dyin', kill me
Poisoned lips
Man it just took your kiss
And then I couldn't breathe
Yeah I'm dyin'
Yeah I'm dyin'
Yeah I'm dyin'
Yeah I'm dyin'
Hell yeah!
Poisoned lips
Man it just took your kiss
And then I couldn't breathe
I'm dyin', kill me
Poisoned lips
Just a moment of bliss
And then I fell to my knees
I'm dyin', kill me
Poisoned lips
Man it just took your kiss
And then I couldn't breathe
I'm dyin', kill me
This is a really cool song. I really like the lyrics because they remind the listner of that person that totally broke their heart, without totally depressing the listner. I actually almost felt like laughing as I was reading the words. Something about the song hits you and makes your feelings about that "lost love" so pathetic and sad that all you can do is laugh. For some reason it reminds me off the type of song OffSpring would sing. Really good work Kerrick.
One thing. The line "And I then couldn't breathe" sounds a little funny. Maybe you want to change it or re-word it.