Echo (Rhyme)

Lonesome place

far from here

calling out

"I am near."



Windy voice

like a stream

carry me

to a dream.



Fast asleep

echoes call

fertile moon

forget-me-nots.



You love me

I love you

ruddy cheeks

hearts ring true.



Glistened touch

Love in eyes

moonstruck kiss

Hearts aflight.



Tender smile

words caress

sweetened breath

One pure bliss.



Lovely song

flowers bloom

one plus one

[sighs] equals two.



Shall we dance

"dreamy face"?

Here we go

close embrace.



Fly the skies

dark and blue

stars now shine

as they choose.



I awake

love's surprise

I miss you

tell me why?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Very simplistic but hard to make.  Why?  Because I had to make each single line have three syllabic sounds.  This is the best I came up with which some parts don't make sense.  But so doesn't love as well.  You just feel it.  Love doesn't have to make sense.

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Bryan Adam Tomimbang's picture

Cute... - Bryan

Sarah Brooks's picture

I really like this one, and I liked what you said "love doesn't have to make sense".