I love you
And I never will feel blue
Since you love me too
I can express my joy
My love was messed up as a boy
You play the guitar
I hope your not very far
Because you'll never break my heart
Like other girls, just pulling it apart
They couldn't stop tossing it around
Until you finally found
Where I was hiding
You made me learn confiding
I hope that you arrive
You make me feel alive
I care for you dear
Please stay with me here
I hope that you arrive
You make me feel alive
I care for you dear
Please stay with me here
Even though we aren't together
I still search for you in this weather
Even though I may die
You're the reason why
I keep living today
You're lovely in your own way
I can help you
You feel the same as I do
I hope that you arrive
You make me feel alive
I care for you dear
Please stay with me here
I hope that you arrive
You make me feel alive
I care for you dear
Please stay with me here
I hope that you arrive
You make me feel alive
I care for you dear
Please stay with me here
Now I found you on the porch
My feeling burn like a torch
As I come over
You seem to move closer
And realize that its me
Its no more a fantasy
And I hope you stay
Please don't go away
wow
Nice song bro...
Most of the lines flowed really well together except for
"because you'll never break my heart
But the other girls used it to play darts"
I like, and keep most the words the same just make it a little smoother and like a syllable or 2 less than what it is
But otherwise, very good
I like it a lot
A mirror is all that is ever wanted from a shadow
any suggestions to change it
any suggestions to change it to?
mmmh
Something like
"Because you'll never break my heart
Like other girls, just pulling it apart"
That sound good?
A mirror is all that is ever wanted from a shadow
thanks walter I'll change it
thanks walter I'll change it now
I know it doesn't really keep
I know it doesn't really keep the same words but it at least sounds better...
To me anyway
A mirror is all that is ever wanted from a shadow
Thank you Walter! :)
Thank you Walter! :)
your welcome!
Ah I feel cool now cuz I helped my friend wit his song xD
A mirror is all that is ever wanted from a shadow