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Tinkling Minds

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Tiny bells in the mind

In the narrow chasms

Hanging overhead

By tiny strong strings

Silent are they waiting

For the mild poetry breeze

Sway them they tinkle

Brilliant music emanates

Words are successful

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Dove the poet wrote in a comment "tinkling the mind"

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©11 March 2017 - 3:56pm — bishu
23 March 2017 - 4:20pm — TheShadowKnows
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Very Nice

This one doesn't seem so characteristically cryptic but I very much enjoyed. (Or perhaps it is and I just don't realize it!) it's nice to see Allets is still on here too... both you guys were here when I first showed up and are still here now that I've gone! Impressive dedication. 

25 March 2017 - 9:06am — bishu
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Thanks so so much Mr Daniel

Thanks so so much Mr Daniel  for your kind read .... I'll be with you in words till 31-12-2059 . From 1-1-2060 I'll be on Poet's Island with Allets.

©bishu 

 

14 March 2017 - 11:17pm — allets
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Cool Take

Now I will wonder if there are bells tingling as I walk or write? - Nicely written bye the bye, bishu :D

 

 

15 March 2017 - 4:16pm — bishu
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From my inner mind I thank you Dear Sis

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