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The candle dance
Of the wax, red pale light
Dimmed the room
Ever as we seem.
Softly the air passed through
The body of me
To innovate;
The candle dance.
The odd dance of the candle light
Danced better time gone by
Shaking body
Hither and thither
So sweetly.
With great love affairs
The air and the candle light ,eloped
And i am alone
Lost in darkness.
This is very romantic but the only thing is you need a little
More lead up to the last line it's so beautiful but stops a little too short and danced better time gone by is a little disjointed, sorry it was too beautiful not to say, cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thanks
thanks for the comment. i feel to jump over there. so i did so .
Bipurna Tara