When I've Laid My Last Word

With every stroke of the pen to the paper that I lay,

I try to make it better then the last.

Because I know my writing ability and wording skills

will someday come to past.

I try to give the readers something they can relate to

and a little bit of my style,

Something that will soothe them when they need to be,

And a little something that will drive them wild.

I like to stay understood,

Simple words, even for the most complex mind.

I don't like sending people off to left and to the right,

I like to keep them in a straight line.

So when I've laid my last word and posted my last tale,

I'd like for those that took the time to read me, to be

able to say, "he done well"

But nobody knows, not even I, whats left in me to come.

But as long as I got the skills and ability,

I'll keep writing til my time is done.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is for all the readers that find my work to be of good skills and ability. Thank You for taking the time to read my work.

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Dario Preston's picture

I think I've critiqued this one before,but I read it again and I am still feeling it. Tight piece man... Keep on keeping on...

Dario Preston's picture

i am feeling your work. You have nice skills. I really like the way you tell a story and it flows ...

CHRISTIE FELTY's picture

THIS WAS NICE AND IT CAPTURED YOUR STYLE VERY WELL. ANOTHER TIGHT PIECE- KEEP THEM COMING! MUCH LOVE -J