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If I looked at you

Would you look back?

If I stepped to you

How would you react?

If I reached out my hand

Would you take it as a friend?

If we started to talk

How soon would it end?

If I asked you out,

Would my taste suit your style,

If I ask you over,

Would you stay for awhile?

If I made you happy,

And swore to love you forever?

Would you return the favor

Through all the good and bad weather?

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©22 February 2003 - 4:07pm — bigluv21
18 May 2006 - 1:48pm — Shaketa Copelin (not verified)
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Yes, I would. :) This was a very nice piece. I liked the tempo in this.

4 June 2003 - 9:52pm — Dario Preston (not verified)
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I guess you can write about anything and make it nide. Nice write Poet...

30 May 2003 - 4:25pm — Noelle S (not verified)
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awww!

21 May 2003 - 3:25pm — CHRISTIE FELTY (not verified)
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YOU HAVE SO MUCH HEART. I HOPE YOU FIND THAT ONE TRUE LOVE TO STAY BY YOUR SIDE FOREVER. YOU HAVE SO MUCH TO OFFER AND FEELINGS TO SHARE.GREAT WRITE.

29 May 2006 - 9:46pm — 41tulips
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I loved this poem so very much!!!!!!!!

Melissa Marina Flores

14 May 2003 - 3:31am — Calyse Knox (not verified)
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Wow, you really have a beautiful way of writing, so much passion within your words! i truely like all of you're poems on this site! thank you for saying what you did about my poems!