Your Man

I don't know you,

But I wish that I did.

I would change everything about me

Never keep the truth hid.

I'll show you love from all angles,

And affection thats out of this world.

No one would ever believe

How much one guy could love one girl.

If you've never lived a dream,

Then with me you surely will.

And if you never lived out a fantasy,

You would soon know how it feel.

If you've never cried a happy tear,

That fell in the shape of a heart

You would know what it's like

From the very first start.

Cupits arrows from his bow

Would fly out of control.

The sounds of sorrow

Would never again blow.

The church bells would ring

in temples all over the land.

Nothing would compare to you

being my woman and me, Your Man


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41tulips's picture

If a guy would write this for me and was really true about it... I would marry them and be with them forever. I only know one other guy who writes this way... but... oh well, oh nevermind. I loved this poem!!!!!!!!!


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Gerald Rinks's picture

Leon

There is not doubt that you have the heart of a poet and a mind that goes with it. I hope that life has been good to you in your quest for understanding and love. I've read a number of your poems and you do an excellent job of rhyming and expressing yourself so we all can see it in a new way. Thanks!

tk2003's picture

I already told you that this is my favorite poem...Just thought I would do it live and in color...(or black and white as the case would be) Are you sure you didn't unknowingly write this for me? *wink* I love reading your work...Encore...

CHRISTIE FELTY's picture

THIS WAS TOOOOOOOOOO SWEET. I THINK I WILL CRY. YOU AREA HOPELESS ROMANTIC. I LOVE IT. THANKS FOR THE LOVE ON MY PIECE. THAT WAS PRETTY MUCH A PERSONAL LETTER THAT SOMEHOW TURNED INTO SOMEWHAT OF A POEM. ANYWAY THIS WAS TOO MUCH. IF YOU CAN FIND OUT DATES OF ANY POETRY SLAMS IN KNOXVILLE I AM THERE. I AM TAKING THE SUMMER OFF FROM SCHOOL

Azure Bijou's picture

Oh and I forgot to mention...I am also a little breathless :)

Azure Bijou's picture

I am speechless...

Danyail Hardin's picture

awww, this poem is so sweet, it's hard to believe a man can have so much emotion and heartfelt words to say pertaining to the love of one woman..if more men were like you there'd be alot of happy women. P.s.thanx for your nice words about my poems:)

Anna Anderson's picture

I enjoy your writing... much of it touching me and my current situation....