I saw you.
And I couldn't believe,
What just a picture of you
had done to me.
I saw you.
I took my time and viewed it right,
I got it copied in my mind,
Now my brain has taken flight.
I saw you,
So pretty you had me in a daze,
I visioned you for real
in so many different ways.
Oh I saw you,
But then reality set me down
It's nothing more than a picture,
I would never have you around.
But I saw you,
And if life is like memorex,
Then who ever that has you,
Should cherish you to death.
I Saw You.
aaaaah ...the power of fantasy...
Leah
Nice piece. Makes one want to fall in love...
ANOTHER ROMANTIC PIECE. I DIDN'T REALIZE THERE WERE MEN LIKE YOU STILL AROUND ;). I ENJOY READING YOUR STUFF SO MUCH I JUST CAN'T STOP, SO I AM GONNA READ THEM ALL. MUCH LOVE- JADED
I know that it is late to critique this poem.....but I like it alot!!
It reminds me of like things..yeah..
But really good work here!!
Keep going!
romantic......I enjoyed
stay safe :o)