For all that it's worth,
I lend you my hand,
For as long as you need it
For days on end.
If you ever have that load
thats to heavy to bare,
Call for my hand my friend
It will always be there.
For all that it's worth,
I lend you my mind.
When sorrow has you down,
and confort's hard to find,
Give me a call,
We'll sit down and have prayer
We'll tell God all our troubles
All our troubles we'll share.
For all that it's worth,
I give you my heart,
For as long as you should hold it,
We shall never be apart.
And just when you thought
all love has fallen through
For all that it's worth,
Keep in mind that I love you.
**wipes a tear from her face** I love this one. Everyone needs someone like you around.....where do you live again? lol
I had to comment again because I read it again and it grabbed me and told me to tell you that you are an insperation to me.
this one hit home!
this one hit home!
FOR ALL THAT IT IS WORTH...... I LOVED IT AS WELL. I JUST CAN'T SAY ENOUGH. I AM ALMOST MESMERZIDED WITH THE SINCERERITY OF YOUR BEING. I KNOW THAT MAKES NO SENCE BUT I AM TRULY AT A LOSS FOR WORDS, AND THAT IS HARD TO ACCOMPLISH BECAUSE I TALK ALOT! LOL
PEACE OUT
JADED
Leon,
I read most of your poems, starting from the bottom up. This one trully is beautiful. You should have it set to music and let Luther Vandross sing it. (When he's well, of course.)
Your other poems are wonderful as well.
Aarrrgh another beautiful rhyming poem! The sentiment in this is so beautiful...What you dream of a man saying to you...
This poem is really sweet, absolutley wonderful, keep it up.
Very beautiful (sp?) I think you're right...everyone does need someone to talk to once in a while. I like it a lot.
~phew...tear jerker...:) very beautiful...