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Surprise
So hollow and damp at the core of his eyes,
Seeking a soul to most a bountiful surprise,
His thoughts like day but murky as lies,
Another unpleasant and mutating surprise.
So hollow and damp at the core of his eyes,
Seeking a soul to most a bountiful surprise,
His thoughts like day but murky as lies,
Another unpleasant and mutating surprise.
Nice start! nice start! I
Nice start! nice start! I kinda feel the emotion peeking out in your writing. Keep it up!
:)
Thanks, never written anything like this before so always nice to get some positive feedback!
Same here...it's nice getting
Same here...it's nice getting feedback
Welcome to PP
Keep writing, you have the nack ~~A~~
Thanks
Just saw this!
TY!