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broken life
Breaking down
listening to the words you say
commin home to find you only on the brink of a cry
im fallen apart
im crumbling away
my days are shortening to an end
you say you wont do a thing changemy life
yet i am swept in a feelin
a simple thought
you cant make a promise to me
you arent true
what you say is becomming a lie
you are betraying me
in every thought,feeling,word
all i want is a simple promise
but i cant even hold on to that
i cant hold on its to much to take in
my life is closing off
This is a super good poem...you sound so sad though. I hope at least some of these feelings have passed!!