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What do you see through those eyes?

Those eyes as alive as the bayou in spring;

and as I catch your gaze,

I know

each time I write, 

the end fails 

before I have begun.

 

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Stardust's picture

this is just awesome!! so

this is just awesome!! so much in so little :)

an excellent piece. best wishes :)

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Thanks Stardust!

Thanks Stardust!

SSmoothie's picture

I totally get it! beautifully

I totally get it! beautifully put!!!

 

gorgeous write... Missed you ;D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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;-)

Dearest Smoothie!!! I have missed you as well!!!  I'm done slaying dragons & tilting at windmills, & will be a regular here very soon! I can't wait to get my Smoothie fix!!!

savetb's picture

Amazing poem... Hope to learn

Amazing poem... Hope to learn more from your writings

Beavis's picture

Wow!

If you learn anything from my writing I will be shocked, humbled & amazed!

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) that ending did not fail

:) that ending did not fail you, it was simply truth at its best and torment at its worst!


Much Love

Ashley

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:-D

It's all in the inspiration! :-)