I Think You're Right, I Got Dizzy Before This Happened

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If only you had a switch
that would make your world right,
I would flip it.

If only you had a dial,
that could reset all you hurts,
I would spin you back to zero.

But you don't have dials or switches,
and wishes never work,
so I'll keep reading reading your poetry,
and hoping for the happy ending
that's not a fairy tale,
but only exists in two shared minds.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

BEAVIS I DO HAVE A SWITCH....

it's called a smile!


Much Love

Ashley

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;-)

Then may all your days be "sticky" days ;-)

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:) *click*

:) *click*


Much Love

Ashley

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Soooo enjoyed this!

Soooo enjoyed this!

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Thanks!

Thanks!

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Switch Flicking

no dials or switches but buttons to push, this poem activates me...fine penning this - allets


 

 

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Thank you!

Thank you!

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I am trying to recall where

I am trying to recall where the title came from


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Ashley

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"I think you would have more

"I think you would have more success holding your breath than your words*"

http://www.postpoems.org/authors/running_with_rabbits/poem/931813

running_with_rabbits's picture

ahhhh that should have made

ahhhh
that should have made sense to me lol (next time more sleep!)


Much Love

Ashley

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That's one thing I love about

That's one thing I love about your titles. So cryptic, yet so clear. You've got me on the fence with titles now ;-)

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:) I try

:) I try


Much Love

Ashley

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I love you b. Youre the tunes

I love you b. Youre the tunes in my head, the fire in my pen the voice on the wind, whispers compassion, the way you love us so, wabbits love you too! Hugs SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Love tou too! HugSS!!!

Love you too! HugSS!!!

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Love you mean it.

I never had read something before that would give me vertigo.
Spinning myself in a daze to your magnificent heartfelt writings!
Ah, yes I cannot wait for the day that you write me a romantic letter.
Your gooey words would probably leave me stuck to my couch.
Melting my body into a puddle of blushing giggles.
Again Beavis I am amazed at your devotion, and concern.
The attention you give us just know does not go unnoticed.
^_^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Your kindness leaves me

Your kindness leaves me speechless! Thank you ;-)

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beavis you almost made me cry

beavis you almost made me cry


Much Love

Ashley

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;-)

;-)