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Rain falls in sunlight,
stars and stones become as one,
ashes are scattered.

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©29 June 2012 - 7:49am — Beavis
30 July 2012 - 10:00am — heatherburns35
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haiku

Haiku's are short. This is perfectly written haiku. nice work.

31 July 2012 - 3:30pm — Beavis
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Thank you!

I like trying to communicate my idea in such a concise format. I like this one, but thought Moment was the better haiku. I always enjoy finding fellow haiku fan! Thanks for reading and commenting!

2 July 2012 - 1:30pm — running_with_rabbits
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:( I kinda feel like I came

:( I kinda feel like I came over for sex got fingered and then you went to sleep, the poem just starts to warm you up, lossing the thoughts in your mind and paint a picture and then bang it's gone :( for the first time in all of my readings of your work, I think this was to short

Much Love

Ashley

2 July 2012 - 10:40pm — Beavis
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Sorry Dear,

I had a bad case of haiku that night ;-)

5 July 2012 - 5:11am — running_with_rabbits
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so I noticed lol I was also

so I noticed lol I was also slightly worried I was a bit too blunt with my comment lol

Much Love

Ashley

5 July 2012 - 8:05am — Beavis
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I always love anything you

I always love anything you write ;-) besides, sometimes, you only have time for a quickie!

6 July 2012 - 5:12am — running_with_rabbits
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:) oh my dear you are my

:) oh my dear you are my poetical soul mate ;)

Much Love

Ashley

29 June 2012 - 4:10pm — ashes_theartofb...
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~.^

Cinders become ash
ashes produce residue
Inhale me will you?

Ah, I loved this.
=^.^=

"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

5 July 2012 - 5:29am — running_with_rabbits
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that is exactly how I feel

that is exactly how I feel every time I read beavis' work! (this poem excluded) I must visit your page

Much Love

Ashley

6 July 2012 - 12:55pm — Beavis
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Please do!

Ashes is otherworldly good!

6 July 2012 - 4:26pm — running_with_rabbits
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:) we have a beautiful circle

:) we have a beautiful circle of loving, supportive poets now!

Much Love

Ashley

30 June 2012 - 1:40am — Beavis
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Thank you! And now aim

Thank you! And now I am aflame!