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Delicate soul pearls
reflect her hopes; though nothing
remains of the dream.

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Haiku

Haiku looks simple, but to do it well is not so easy. You have achieved it with this one, Beaver.


Smile.. it is the cheapest facelift.

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Thanks kiwi!

Thanks kiwi!

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Beavis I love you!

Beavis I love you!


Much Love

Ashley

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;-)

Love ya too!

running_with_rabbits's picture

love you more! also i wrote

love you more!

also i wrote another kitchen/crying/onions poems


Much Love

Ashley

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this is so gorgeously hopeful yet

sombre at the same time, one of the best haiku and thought provoking reads in a long long time you are amazing! thanks for the share!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I was people watching

I was people watching yesterday at the park, and although I couldn't hear the conversation between the couple, this is how it appeared to me. You always want me to write something spontaneous, so this is as close as I could come ;-)

BTW- you blew me away with Naturally Short!

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Well you blew me away with pearls of poetry!

You should write a little more to share and let us enjoy more of what you can do even if it is just snippets, they would be very much appreciated! Especially since all the help and encouragement you have given to so many! :) HugSS! PS I people watch too! lol!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."