Faraway eyes

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Flashback Fridays

An imaginary savior,

something,

or someone,

you seek,

even though,

we both know

I could never be yours

and you could never believe,

even if it were true;

so let's have another drink,

forget who we actually are,

and pretend 

to save each other 

for just one night.

 

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jessie2376's picture

Love this piece..speaks to

Love this piece..speaks to the we mask our pain with...sex, drugs, food, alcohol...anything to take away the pain, at least for a night! Well done :)

a.griffiths57's picture

This meeting is going so well

This meeting is going so well the last thing you need I think is rescuing. Like your exploration of feelings - you 'd think you were excersising your imagination; but i think these emotions of yours are as refined. A good reader for the reader.


 

 

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Beavis's picture

;-)

deeply appreciated!

running_with_rabbits's picture

:/ is it whiskey or

:/ is it whiskey or scotch....


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

:-)

I don't recall, but no doubt it was a whiskey, perhaps a fine rye ;-)

running_with_rabbits's picture

:/ then I am going to have to

:/

then I am going to have to refuse the offer, I am on a pure scotch kick these days :p


Much Love

Ashley

SSmoothie's picture

Par excellence! Love this

Par excellence! Love this everyword perfectly placed and irony lacing itself in the fibres of the letters forming the words. Bravo! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

:-D

thank you Dear! I could recall the sound of the ice cubes slideing & clattering as I wrote thought about and wrote this. (Who knew?) Thank you deeply Dear!!!

allets's picture

Enjoyed This One, Beav

Direct and honest write. Interesting take on the one night stand. :D ~slc~
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Beavis's picture

:-)

love a comment of an honest write! Thank you Stella!

allets's picture

Your Portraits & Settings

are touchable and akin to the experiences of all of us at one time or ever. Encore, you, knowing you are other employed presently. But encore anyway, you! Stella