Through the glass of magic lands
I wish I could go to
I am bound here by my hands
Can't get away from you
To take a walk through talking flowers
Escape my life of stress
Dream away my life for hours
Get rid of all the mess
The looking glass is made of dreams
A wish to be alone
Run away from the Hearted Queen
Who sits on royal thrown
Forever you could stay right here
And here you'd be alone
The Queen of Hearts won't find you there
She'll sit on royal thrown
Cry a river full of tears
To swim to a dryer place
Push away all my fears
Wipe the raindrops from my face
The imaginary friends keep silent
But I still hear little voices
In my head crazed and violent
Trying to make my choices
I've taken a break from my hectic life
When this place started turning
My imagination brought along strife
And inside i felt I was burning
The crazy land within the glass
Was getting worse and worse
I hoped that the Queen would pass
But she grabbed me up with force
Suprised at last I wanted out
To go back where I dreaded
I began to kick and then to shout
I cried as well as pleaded
She let me go and I fell down
Ran so far away
I found myself on the ground
Sleeping through the day
I awoke and then I knew
That this was just a dream
Nothing in it was right or true
And not as wonderful as it seems
Never again will I want to leave
My life of imperfection
I know now to pull and heave
My life in one direction
To be happy...
Very lovely and sincere. I enjoyed the personification and meter overall finely crafted. Only concern: I notice a tendency from you to ignore punctuation. While effective at times, it shouldn't be a stylistic constant regardless of the individual writing and what works best you know? I loved the poem though! :)