I need help
In the end of every thing
My life is deserted
It is never ending and all over
I see the clock on the wall
but it does not move
it is still
but i am moving faster then life
One day her
the next is no where
you come and you go
but always in time
It needs to end
Be over with
DONE!
as i read this.. i could tell
as i read this.. i could tell immediately that you are talented, so i went and read your other things.. your very good. you must be a very interesting person:)
Done
I know this feeling well ;) Its like the song Let me let go.. and many poems I have read about the lingering of insanity caused by emotion. Good job kiddo! You may want to fix the spelling on here :) (One day her) <3 Later gator!
~M