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THe Man in the Bath Tub
Today I walked away from the man in the bathtub.
From his
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I walked away from the crimson drip.
From his heart
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I told him last time; it’s not my mess.
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I get the no naughty business in the shower vibe...? LOL!
intreguing poem I like the tempo and the sound effects rhythm. its like telling a guy to clean up his act. which I guess has broken a heart or two. lol probably not even close but I hope you at least enjoyed my insights :) i like sound effects or repetitive rhythmic beats I have quite a few in my folio, one of my favourites are Droplets of briliance and the rise 1,2&3. fun write thanks!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
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