Looking up into the murky sky
I felt the rain, as begin to fall from the heavens
then out of no where, a boy appears
On the mound of Red Roses
he held a great White staff
he looked down at me
and took a moment to search my soul
So I look into his eyes, blue and pure
and got the feeling that I did not need to know more
he walks toward me and took a moment
then stretched his hand, out to help
I reach up, to take his hand
and then he vanished, as quickly as he appeared.
but at my feet, he left a note
that said
"Its your life,
take control."
This is true poetry even for me, you use great imagery here.
Keep up the good work!
Sara
This is bullshit.