All that is left
Is gone
All that is gone
Found
Down some old street
All rivers meet
Seas to
Ocean's of me
Oceans of you
Tides came and went
Took some of me
Took some of you
All that is left
Gone
All that is gone
found.
I like this! This is short, yet really good. Its a little twisting, i had to re-read it twice. lol. To make sure i read it right. :) Very good. Hope to see more from you, and hope you'll check out my poems as well!
I like this! This is short,
I like this! This is short, yet really good. Its a little twisting, i had to re-read it twice. lol. To make sure i read it right. :) Very good. Hope to see more from you, and hope you'll check out my poems as well!
-Elfy*
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Hey Thanks for your comment, shall get around to reading some of your poetry when I get use to the site. jd