Author Information
Fandimonium
Folder:
2008
whisppered love unfaithful
a moment left too soon
colours shine agaisnt you
in light of this new moon
flickers breeze across me
as always like your hands
dignity and coordination
and all our best laid plans
nothing lasts forever
even this will pass
with tempered solid lyrics
and hearts made of glass
I really like the last stanza but i think the last line could use one more word maybe"made up of glass" just for flow purposes. Otherwise it's good, just keep a look out for typo's. I have to go through all of mine and do the same lol.
Nicole.J.Burgesss
I like this, very lyrical. Thanx for this one...