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One brown shoe, old and lonesome
Longing for a place
Stuffed in a closet at the back of your mind
Feeling for a taste
It's been lonely, used and broken
But loyal all the while
But you've got new shoes
White and perfect
New shoes to make you smile

 

 

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and now you've no shoes, not white nor brown, no shoes to keep you warm, no shoes to hide your frown

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©21 December 2003 - 5:20am — running_with_rabbits
6 March 2004 - 8:17am — running_with_rabbits
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wow nikki what a powerful critique
i see now how i write meaningless ones and never critique any of your poems
and how i am suck a bad friend

you have no fuckin clue what this about do you
not that you care
you just need someone to brag to

Much Love

Ashley

30 December 2003 - 12:06am — Nicole.J.Burgess
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Don't make me miss the brown shoes any less. We all love brown
nikki

Nicole.J.Burgesss