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Love. . .

Just an echo's whisper
Lain upon mine ear
Just a weeping sorrow
Swept inside mine tear
Just a joy
That's lost to thee
Just a prison
In this purgatory
Just a dream
A mockery
Just an echo's whisper
Captivity free

 

 

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LOVE? lol, what can you say about love that it can not say for itself?

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©4 May 2002 - 2:38am — running_with_rabbits
12 May 2004 - 2:03pm — adryan (not verified)
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My impulse would have been to use "a whisper's echo" but I like it

12 October 2003 - 4:58am — the exit music (not verified)
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i wasn't going to say anything about this, but then i read: 'Author's Comments on "An echo’s whisper"
LOVE? lol, what can you say about love that it can not say for itself?'

is this the first time you typed this? it's powerful. it's strange to think that even though you know that love is undescribable, you constantly try to describe it. the irony is sweet, but i could have it no other way.

25 June 2002 - 8:59am — turonah
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Wow; awesome poem, ash! Love the imagery and juxtaposition that you use - it really puts a punch into the poem.
Good Work!

Reuben

13 May 2002 - 1:28am — Nicole.J.Burgess
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I like the lines about the dream and the mockery.
Pretty good though not the best you've done.
Nikki

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