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This guy will be the death of me
But death's never been such fun
And I can't help but thinking
That he might be the one
The great love of my youth
That makes it all worth while
My knight in shinning armour
Someone to make me smile
So if this love is killing me
Then I guess I'll die young
From an incurable addiction
To the drugs of his tongue

 

 

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©11 April 2002 - 1:32am — running_with_rabbits
5 October 2002 - 8:00pm — Christina Veal (not verified)
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All I can say is wow. Oh, and great ending:

>>Then I guess I’ll die young
From an incurable addiction
To the drugs of his tongue<<

15 June 2002 - 12:29am — running_with_rabbits
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Addicting words nikki WORDS

you sick f*ck you
lol(gotta love dogma)

ash

Much Love

Ashley

13 April 2002 - 3:16am — Nicole.J.Burgess
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you know what i want to say
enough said

nikki

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12 April 2002 - 5:25pm — turonah
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k, change the third line to "And I just can't help thinking" or just drop the "ing" to make it think. Otherwise, it's a very good poem, but it seems a little straight forward for you lol
(and I thought you didn't like knights lol)

Reuben