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I could never lie to you
Even if I tried
I could never lose your trust
I'd rather lose my pride

I could never give you up
I'd never let you go
I could never drop your love
It's all I want to know

I could never live a day
Without something to see
I could never sleep a night
Without you holding me

I could never walk alone
I need a hand to hold
I could never stay this young
Without you I'd grow old

 

 

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I could but I don't want too

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©31 March 2002 - 4:00am — running_with_rabbits
21 June 2002 - 12:09am — running_with_rabbits
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course i love you

you my baby

ash

Much Love

Ashley

31 March 2002 - 7:10am — Vicki D (not verified)
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i love how you put the title the way you did...very nice..deep...good

love ya always
Vicki

15 April 2002 - 9:29pm — turonah
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The title seems wrong for this one, but it's good. I think this is one of your few love poems that don't have any anger, etc in it :-)
That line "I could never drop your love" seems a little out of place ... maybe there's a better word instead of drop...?
Overall, a good job

Reuben

21 January 2003 - 2:17pm — running_with_rabbits
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And Ruby there is anger in it
the title is the anger
I am tallking about how I could never give him up and I love him so much
but the title is like "but I could"

there is a little anger there hun

so :P

Much Love

Ashley

13 May 2002 - 1:34am — Nicole.J.Burgess
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Awww...you really do love me.
hehehe.
Very Nice I like it.
Nikki

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