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Caged in by you
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2002
Every time I like someone new
I'm suddenly caged in by you
Your smile turned upside down
Is like a king with no crown
Every time we speak you lie
Moving on would make you die
And every time I kill you
I kill a peace of me too
Every time we talk this through
We bite off more then we can chew
Every time I try too care
The painful memories are there
Every time I say I don't
It's really that I won't
Every time that I'm with you
I turn three shades of blue
Every time that you're away
My sky is somewhat grey
Every time you're in my life
And every time you're the strife
Every time is one to many
And from now until I'm twenty
Every time I love someone new
I'll be caged in by you
"I kill a piece of me too"
Gave me shivers hun.
I like this one,not your best though.
Nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
That was good. sorry they're so breif, you told me to leave something short :)
I really liked the poem, although the situation shown is sad.
What can I say, I like it. Tis good
love ya always
Vicki
Nikki. . .one of these days you are going to tell me which one is my best so everytime you say "not your best tho" I can go "I see", and then I can write a better one so you can't say that coz I know I have topped my top
erg child :P
Much Love
Ashley
Wow ... ... ... WOW
What can I say? This is a fantastic piece of work, Ashley! Just the imagery, the verbal word play; it's excellent.
The only thing I would change is the line "My sky is somewhat grey" to "My sky is cloudy grey"
Reuben