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2001 my heart says no....my heart says yes...
every breath u breath...across my chest...
so simple...
so extreme...
fighting off the emptiness…..
holding back the recklessness…..
my mind's so foolish….
don’t look... just leap…
yes…
no…
and still I go…
unsure…
who cares……
but I know…
I do…
I always do
A good old one i really like this one so there!!!
Great job anyway
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
I like this one better than number 36 i think it was :) although you could have added a bit maybe...i like the yes, no parts and yeah :) love ya always Vicki
this is an interesting period breaking stanza'z poem..... it's not the greatest peice of art, but i understand your words.. keep writin