life in my eyes

stuck in society
but time keeps running
hints come in varieties
like my body growing
tendencies expanding
years are my wages
they out last never ending
are we living to die
or begin something new
people paths tie
but sometimes become unloose

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poet610's picture

Great poem,

very nice poem,
I guess we are always living yet always dieing.
we all look for freedom but never look in the small places, guess that really don't make any sense :). most of the time i just rant haha

ashley27's picture

it makes plenty of sense and

it makes plenty of sense and thanks for the comment its well appreciated


not only rains
it pours
sun not only shines
it enlightens
not only love
but give life

emphasis's picture

HI!!

woooooow!! feelin this one mama... very nice read!!


** smile for me!!**

ashley27's picture

thank you

thank you


not only rains
it pours
sun not only shines
it enlightens
not only love
but give life

allets's picture

let's get metaphysical

Essence is a state of being

rain is wet because

the pavement weeps.

When it pours

I wish for umbrellas

and dream of macs.

Oh enlighten me sun

I lost my life

give it back.

 

A~~

05-16-13

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