well i guess we wasted time
and you're a ghost of mine
hidden inside my head
please don't believe I'm dead.
and i know you saw me here
now you're too scared to hide
you can take my hand
we'll take a look inside
regain your balance and perspective till you're happy again
the moment you forget me as your lame best friend
you could never hold in your mind what can come from a year
i know i don't need you now,
but i still wish you were here.
can't you feel it now
are you still scared to die
i know your heads messed up
i know you may even try
you must be four walls lost now.
as you lay on the floor
and i can see her now
is she a ghost of yours?
Sorry if I'm wrong. It sounds
Sorry if I'm wrong. It sounds like your best friend died and the memory of them became a ghost one you tried to help to the afterlife but if that was true I don't get the last stanza. Whatever the case may be this is an awesome intriguing poem, I read it at least six times trying to understand and I always love poems that make me think. Superb work, even if you don't think it's your best.
Long days and pleasant nights
Diamond
I love your imagery.
I love your imagery.
thank you a bunch
i read some of yours and theyre amazingg
Thank you very very much. :)
Thank you very very much. :)