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EDEN
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Love: Erotic And Otherwise
ocean's lapping
melting duo
reclining
glowing
touching.....
his fingers
nimble
soothe.....
her spine
baby grand
anticipates
strephonade composed
skilled digit
traverses
lower....
nymphatic
static
dulcifies
intensifies....
two flowing forms
one breath
tide swells
as he
last moment
tensing
she arches
meeting....
breakers smash
energy
exhaled
thrust back
sea and sand part......
molten shapes
become
once more
dual lives
at rest
nestled
at Neptune's door.
Fran Hinkle
7/20/03
This is exquitely erotic.
This is exquitely erotic.
Starward
oh this was exqusitely written...and the words do have more impact...the short lines bring movement to the wole poem...i really liked it...and of course the theme...but theocean imagery was skillfully intertwined...can it be my theme song?? hehe...i am a fish girl after all...keep writing...stay strong