If I Could Tear Away the Veils

If only I could tear away the veils

And see what I could see,

After some were back again

I'd see things differently.

 

If only I could teach my mind to behave the way it should,

Across the heavens I could soar, and through the thorny wood.

 

If only I could teach myself to become alive with love,

I would become love.

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truthintragedies's picture

I like this a lot. I love the

I like this a lot. I love the lines, "If only I could teach my mind to behave the way it should, Across the heavens I could soar, and through the thorny wood." Really ignites something special. I like the idea of the last stanza. <3 


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Ha yeah thanks

This poem seems kind of aimless, but it does have meaning. It's not made to really impress a lot of people but I'm glad you liked the poem.


 

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