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ANOTHER CHANCE
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LINGER... Another chance thats all Im asking
How can an emotionless guy do nothing?
Another time for me to show you
The real me who's longing for you?
Another chance to feel your kiss
Another chance to feel your touch
How can you be so cruel not to give me that?
All I want is you,and youre the one I need
In my life,its absolutely complete
All I want is to hold you and snuggle you tight
As if youre smothering me each night
Another chance,another chance
If I can only have that another chance...
Love lost is weighted twice
Love lost is weighted twice the value of it first found, my how it appreciates over time... Good work save for the last " another chance" perhaps "that one other chance" ? Just a thought for the flow, but I enjoyed it all the same :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."