Counting the time
counting the hours
counting the seconds
O God how i missed your touch
i feel so deathly cold
tired
trembling
shaking
the days have passed my blood has formed a river flowing from me
my heart rejects my mind it bleeds from me hurting my soul
i make mistakes forgive them i remember every second with you ask you shall recieve your answer
your gestures have locked me in a icy prison with you lyes the only key to my freedom
i have lived my life in vein i fall to my knees i sacrafise myself for your just you
face to face eyes to eyes heart to heart
tired trembling shaking hurting i'm to weak to be without you
Ok ok I have to say that this is a beautiful poem ... you need to just take a bit more time and make sure all your words are correct . So we can receive the full meaning of what you are writing ..... thats all I see that is a problem .. otherwise .. very awesome poems and very heartfelt words .