A Shame

What a shame
Here stands a boy, wandering alone
Not knowing a place to call home
Not at peace with himself or the world
He just stands there, with his hands in a curl
Staring at the stars, laying
"I'm fine" he keeps saying

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drangel's picture

A firm resolve in the face of extremes of abuse

The poem is highly appreciable. My best wishes!


Dr S T Wali
Pediatrician/Pediatric HIV Specialist
New Delhi-110001

SSmoothie's picture

love it! in denial or

love it! in denial or resillient? a worrier or a warrior! that last line can be taken somany ways loved this wonderful piece thanks SS Id like to take it to mean you take your self out of it and are free!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

bluebird_'s picture

Thank you!

Thank you!

Kiddo's picture

relatable

I enjoyed this one a lot because of its relatability. It flowed very nicely. It's very well written. One of my favorites. I cant wait to see what else you post!

bluebird_'s picture

Thank you! I've recently just

Thank you! I've recently just got in the knack of writing poems and this truly means a lot!