60 seconds

a poem in 60 sec?
kidding me,right?
gve it a try
Here it goes Dint critisize
Im the boss
Tme flies so fast
Dont make so much fuss
Or u'll miss the fun
And be sorry
For what yo have done.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

wha:)haha..this is fun. To my teachers, pard0n me for my misspelld(?)w0rds..lol

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SSmoothie's picture

Ha ha! Awsome!!!

Isn't it amazing what we can do if we put our minds to it? What a great little rhyme! Gee competitions getting tough! What spelling, it was so good I dint notice! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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thanks

haha..thanks for n0t n0tising it..y0urs is great to0.

SSmoothie's picture

PSML!

You're so cute and funny! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."