Younger Me

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The Long Night

I had a dream, you see
Of a younger me, a teen
He was a little naive
But he revealed to me

That he was meant to be
more than the man he'd seen
Through the looking glass
When he looked upon me

He took a class you see
It was his dream to be
A painter of the words
trapped in his memories

And I pondered the path
Lost in the aftermath
This vision of the past
And I tried to react

I grabbed the rack
With the pens and that
was enough to blast
me to a point in the past

I attacked this rap
With intensity and snatched
All the thoughts in the back
of my brain I'd hatched

Over years of fears
Held dear and in tears
I began to hear
All the voices so clear

It was near to here
I broke through the veneer
Of the peers I hear
When I speak the sincere

It was clear, my dear
That I'd never be cheered
For the rhymes I speak
Although the beats are clear

So I said goodbye
To the me that once died
In the eyes of my mind
I thought he'd be just fine

I always towed the line
Between pain and dying
I'm just a fucked up mess
With a rhyme inside

It was a beautiful time
Between just me and mine
Now deep inside I find
An empty hole to die

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allets's picture

Beats

a term my gramd neohew intriduced ti my lexicon of rap and Hop. I actually purcgaded ll cool jay back in the heyday of the neo-riff voices. I may pist one of mine, but I'd raher sell 'em:D


 

 

S74RW4RD's picture

Very impressive evocation.

Very impressive evocation.


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