In one sunday morning I ponder beneath the sceneries
In every existence of my being might someone value in vain
Under the influence of cannabis I write this experience
Of me remembering her in the hallway crying
I did not notice till now that I was in this shitty situation
Having me put myself in someone's shadow
I thought I was in her eyes all this time but in some occasion,
Struggles between my brain I cannot follow
Has she truly given him up or am I just convincing myself
That we are together but looks like just a temporary hangover
Was I the intro of her goddamn journey on happiness
Or am I just an ad lib to her continuous pursuit of him forever
[=]Pause
Not Good
"...just an ad lib..." Whoa. Not good - great write though, well constructed poetry - allets -
Thanks for the correction
Thanks for the correction