and you're buried in a lost tomb
like a wonb
and i see it's so cryptic
soon i'll dig you out
with my love
forever hold your heart
so high above
so raise a glass so high
stop your soul
and take a sip of life
and pay the toll
well now
was i the one to save you
well now
well all i am is nothing
cause' i'm just a simple man
like a doll
to slit my paper wrists
break my fall
and i am the only one
who knows you well
but you're in white heaven
you can hardly tell
well now
was i the one to save you
well now
and on the edge of the cliff
a life was dashed
too quick
too quick
well now
was i the one to save you
well now
and i'll look up towards the sky
and i'll think of you
i'll cup my hands and cry
i've been here and there and back
but i just wish i was where you are
this girl
my days
goodbye
always
This is a really good poem. I very much enjoyed reading it. It has good rhythm and flow. Very good work. Keep it up.
Amazing. Keep writing...
-Leah