goodbye
to every little sadness in your
sweet life
i always shield you from the cold of the
sad night
and never set the sparrows free
my princess
undone
is your heart slow and weary cause its
reborn
when all the ones youve trusted have just
torn you
but i swear
goodbye sweet girl
and farewell
this time
i love you always
you are my life
and i am your death
goodbye
let your heart open magic with a
sweet cry
thats full of smiles and the wisdom in a
birds eye
just never let the world get the
last goodbye
sunlight on the rainbow
the path is long
and we're unknown
a single ray
of light just shines
and i love you
i know youre true
and i love you
you know im true
goodbye sweet world
and farewell
in time
i love you always
youre all my life
i love you all
goodbye
I don't know why but this poem seemed so personal to me, I cried. I guess maybe I've been told those things... anyway you write wonderfully and I do hope you can critique mine also. Good job
Melissa Marina Flores