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Nightmare into nightmare

Begining may be positive

may be so fine

won't take long

to break all dreams

 when it'll turn out to be coarse

 it'll turn out to be negative

leaving behind someone whiningly

 

woke up, pretend to be normal 

war? what was that?

bloody nightmare, thought all over

it wasn't just a nightware 

a few lines mummering with anger

no, no i won't let that happen 

what i already saw 

 

say i say

i will save you

till the very end 

i will protect you

oh! my friend 

i know it seems a way too far 

my will, will freeze this melting snow fall.

all we did was running...

 

woke up, didn't pretend to be normal

it was just a nightmare

where all the promise were safe 

that's all i remember.

  

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this  poem is about a person who was dreaming, in his dream he went into another  dream where he saw blood every where, it look like war scene , wasn't so clear, left behind someone, suddenly he woke up, he was so scared but that all happening in his real life too, everyone was running. He was with his friend, like his dream he didn't mean to leave behind anything, with his promise, they were running and he woke up again and found himself in his bed, there was no war everything was normal.      

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©24 December 2013 - 11:30am — alkaharuno
29 July 2015 - 8:32pm — allets
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Thank You

for the "trigger" of the poem, but reading it was the pleasure and the adventure. Meaning is secondary to art and you have a unique style that is the ride. B well.
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15 December 2015 - 3:25pm — alkaharuno
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thank you so much, your

thank you so much, your comment give me more confidence to write.