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The whispering wind that yearns for the trees,
the life lessons we learn with ease,
the wrong kind of people we try to please,
the perfect moment we wish would freeze.
The whispering wind that yearns for the trees,
the life lessons we learn with ease,
the wrong kind of people we try to please,
the perfect moment we wish would freeze.
This made me smile and remember..........
I love this, it made me think of a poem I wrote in my 20's titled 'With Me Poetry Agrees' ( it's on my web page they are listed in alphabetical order so if you wanted you could look it up to read.) It is very much like yours but a bit longer. It had such a flow to it. It really made me smile to see another young person had stumbled upon the same alliteration and use that too. Try sometime to expand this one of yours I think you would really enjoy the flow and the winsome nature of it. Thanks for the share oh and welcome to our big little community here. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen
P.S here is the link to that poem. I decided to dig it up and not make you do all the work yourself. Enjoy. Again thanks for making me smile.
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/palewingedpoetess/poem/687298
Lovely poem
Lovely poem
thanks
thanks , i like your poem 'what i see' :))
im just a teenager but ive been writing poetry since i started primary school , so its more of a talent than a subject to me. Other than that i love art and sport! My last year in school and hoping to travel to Japan because i always dreamt to :3 ( hopef